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Thursday, February 28, 2013

Prologue...just fiddling around with an idea.



Bright moonlight cast a beam through the dark window of the cold eerie room. Cheryl looked upon the closed eyes of the form that lay on the four-poster bed at one end of the large spacious room.
She was trembling, looking about her as if expecting someone or something to jump out and scare her.
Something in her, urged her to move closer. A few more steps brought her to the middle of the room. Everything in her told her that this was a terrible idea.
The form upon the bed did not move as she approached closer, nearing the foot of the bed.
Stiff and now more scared than ever, Cheryl stole a quick glance behind her. All remained the same; the bedroom door stood open just a crack, enough to let in a thin stream of light.
Taking a breath she placed her hand on the post at the end of the bed and moved around the side. Now her heart was beating so loudly she could feel the pounding in her head.
The white face of the form on the bed sent chills down her whole body. She tried not to look at it, but instead at the pillow on which the the dark hair was spread. Daring to move a little closer, Cheryl noticed the corner of an envelope, barely noticeable, protruding from under the pillow's end.
As she reached out to lift the pillow and pull it out, someone grabbed her around the mouth from behind.


So uh, what d'you think? I probably need a bit more description don't I. Will work on that!
If this short prologue took your interest in any way... comment to let me know what you thought. :) I'd love to hear your response, no matter how critical/wonderful it may be.

I'll post more if you liked it! ;)